time spent on smartphone and tablet by six various categories.

The given pie charts illustrate the information about
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spent on
smartphones
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and tablets by six various categories. The general overview here is that the games were the most popular activity spent on these two devices, whereas the least amount of
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was spent on the news by smartphone compared to utilities by
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. According to the charts, it can be seen that people spent 57% of their
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on games by
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as compose to
smartphones
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at only 37%.
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,
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spent by
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on social networks was 14% higher than on tablets ,which was 15%.
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, more
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was spent on utilities by smartphone compared to a mere 3% by
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.
On the contrary
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,
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spent on music and videos by
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was higher than on
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(around 13% and 8% respectively).
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, the people who spent their
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on the other activities by
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accounted for 8%, while was spent on
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only 5%.
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, Neither two devices were spent low
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on the news which accounted for 3% by
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but 4% by
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