Some people think that having a retirement age ( e.g 65 years ) for everybody ,regardless of occupation is unfair .They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earliest age . Do you agree or disagree? Which type or workers do you think should benefits from early retirements.

Setting retirement age for all the

workers

without taking into consideration the type of

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is a hot topic around the world. In

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essay, I will be discussed my point of view that the employees have to enjoy early retirements benefits if the type of their

job

is hard and if they have the main responsibility of growing up their children ,despite

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policy could result in unfair decisions sometimes. Blue-collar

job

workers

,

to begin

with ,

work

in a very hard condition every day

as a result

to face many health problems like physical problems. Construction

workers

and traders ,

for instance

, have usually back pain or joint pain due to physical activities.in fact

of

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that ,they are not able to continue to

work

in

this

work

field for a long period of time. Women's and single parents ,

furthermore

, have the responsibility to grow up their children and to do all the housework as a consequence to put a lot of effort into their everyday lives.An example of

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is women

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and at the same time has to prepare everything for their families everyday living,

as a result

, to feel more tired day by day and their energy level to drop off as they become elder. Retirement

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the same age for all the

workers

,

on the other hand

,prevent the government and politicians from unfair decisions and make all the

workers

equally. If

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,

for example

,decide single parents to receive

pension

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earlier than all the

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that will be unfair for

another member

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society like disabled people. In summary, having an early retirement age for some

workers

like tradie and women can be very beneficial for their health due to their type of occupation but at the same time could be unfair. In my opinion ,the pros outweigh the cons and a number of

workers

especially those who do physical

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deserve pension benefits earlier than the white-collar

workers

.