Having big salary is more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that high wages can be more significant in one's life

instead

of being a happy professional. I strongly stand that

satisfaction

at the job is more important than the amount of money that you get for it. In

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I will support my point of view. The possibility of a joyful career is a recent notion.

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, just after the British industrial revolution and the large scale production of goods, that society could be

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on building up a pleasure personal working development.

As a result

, his process was the seed that gave the possibility to fulfil a more rational and psychological way of seeing life as a whole. Recently, happiness is an important aspect of mental health, a crucial topic today. Nowadays, the majority of adults around the world spend at least 1/3 of one daily hour focusing on work, which means that 1/3 of our lives are spent at work.

Additionally

, recent research showed that 42% of workers above 30 years that changed the professional path, did so because of the

satisfaction

with what we're doing, willingness to have less money, but more full fullness. As consequence, these data highlight the increased weight that people are giving for personal

satisfaction

and how it is

also

related to professional content. The human changed their

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with happiness and duties In conclusion, as a society that has more possibilities to provide elementary physical needs, mental health and

satisfaction

took an important place in the occupational field of a human.

Moreover

, once-daily work hours occupy so long in our life, we need to associate it with a pleasant occupation because just doing so, is possible the personal and professional progress.