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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The process below shows how to make dough for a pizza. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

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overall,the process begins with mixing four cups of wheat flour with one and a half cups of water
then
two
 teaspoons of salt and
finally
 a half teaspoon of dried yeast to make a
dough
 and ends with slicing the ready to bake
dough
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the dough
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 into three equal pieces of
two
 hundred and seventy-five grams each. In the beginning,
dough
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the dough
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 is poured into a stand mixer where it is mixed for
two
 minutes in slow motion.The speed of the mixer is
then
 added moderately allowing the
dough
 to mix a little bit faster for five minutes.,Afterwards the mixer speed is regulated backwards to mix at a slow-motion again for
two
 minutes.
Moreover
,the
dough
 is left to stand for
two
 hours to allow the yeast to work on it making it rise to almost double the size.The raised
dough
 is
then
 kneaded to expel all air bubbles .,Afterwards the
dough
 is ready for baking and should be divided into thirds.
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