The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the word. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons relevant
The charts below provide the percentage of
water
usage for three different purposes in six different countries
of the world.
Overall
, it is obvious that most countries
use water
especially
for agricultural purposes except the two Add the comma(s)
,especially
countries
which utilize water
for industrial usage whereas
using Correct word choice
where
water
for households in all countries
were
the lowest.
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
To begin
with, it is clear that
a major portion of water
consumption could be found in the agricultural sector. More than 80 % of water
in Africa and Asia is consumed for this
purpose followed by South America with 71% but it is only 39% and 32% for this
purpose in North America and Europe respectively.
In contrast
, Europe and North America use most of their water
for a different purpose with approximately half of their water
resource consumed by the industrial sector. The proportion is far higher than the numbers found in other areas where they range from 5% to 12%.Submitted by sandarmyint740 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, countries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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