The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the word. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons relevant

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the word.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons relevant
The charts below provide the percentage of
water
usage for three different purposes in six different
countries
of the world.
Overall
, it is obvious that most
countries
use
water
especially
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,especially
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for agricultural purposes except the two
countries
which utilize
water
for industrial usage
whereas
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where
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using
water
for households in all
countries
were
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the lowest.
To begin
with,
it is clear that
a major portion of
water
consumption could be found in the agricultural sector. More than 80 % of
water
in Africa and Asia is consumed for
this
purpose followed by South America with 71% but it is only 39% and 32% for
this
purpose in North America and Europe respectively.
In contrast
, Europe and North America use most of their
water
for a different purpose with approximately half of their
water
resource consumed by the industrial sector. The proportion is far higher than the numbers found in other areas where they range from 5% to 12%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, countries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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