Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution, and airport construction. One reason for this is the growth in low-cost passenger flights, often to holiday destinations. Some people say that government should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily. Do you agree or disagree?

Air traffic is

organized

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the organized

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movement of

aircrafts

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aircraft

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to fly from

one

place to another. Every

mode

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model

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of transportation plays part in damaging the environment. Aviation is

one

of them. I strongly agree that that higher authorities should impose more taxes on plane tickets to reduce

amount

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the amount

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of passengers which will lead to less noise pollution.

Moreover

, lesser the

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number of travelers

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travelers

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travellers

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lesser the airport construction.

First

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point of view is that discounted price of anything attracts

public

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the public

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.

Therefore

,

pocket friendly

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pocket-friendly

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flights

from

one

country to another fascinates everybody which increases the

number

of riders. As the

result

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,result

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the

number

of

flights

inflates which

them

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apply

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contributes to air pollution through

airplanes

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aeroplanes

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fuel.

For example

, there were hardly two connecting

flights

from Karachi to Dubai but now we can find more than two

flights

each day around the clock. Adding on, the prices of these

flights

are reduced to about 20% of their original price on weekends and 30% on days off.

In addition

to

this

, the increased

number

of

airplanes

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aeroplanes

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result in making more airports. As airports required

large

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a large

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portion of land which

then

leads to deforestation. Deforestation causes global warming and climate change.

These

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factor contributes

in

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to

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damaging the Earth. For

instant

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an instant

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,

one

country should have about

one

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one-third

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third

of their land covered in forest but Pakistan has only 2.2% of

forest

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the forest

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.

Moreover

, there were just three main airports but now major cities are planning to build

airport

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airports

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due to

increased

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the increased

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number

of passengers. Bringing

this

to an end, we have damaged Earth enough now it’s time for

administration

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the administration

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to act. They should impose heavy taxes on

aviation

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the aviation

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industry so that

number

of

flights

reduces.

This

will be for

safety

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the safety

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of Earth and its environment.