You are working in a school. Write a letter to the Principal to recommend your friend for the position of sports teacher in your school. In your letter – say how long you have known him/her – describe his/her qualifications – explain why you think he/she would be suitable for the job.

#school #friend #position #sports #teacher #qualifications #job

Dear

Mrs.

Change the punctuation

Mrs

show examples

Jones, I am writing

this

letter to you to give the reference of one of my friends who is better suitable for the current opening of the

sport

Change the noun form

sports

show examples

teacher in our school. I have been in touch

Change preposition

with

show examples

him from

Change the word

show examples

younger age as we both studied together at the same school.

Furthermore

, we have done our college together, but

then

he moved to another city for

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

higher education. Apart from

this

, he is my neighbour so often when he visits the town he sees me, and we

Correct your spelling

hang out

show examples

hangout

Correct your spelling

hang out

show examples

together. He is

well qualified

Add a hyphen

well-qualified

show examples

man as he had done

masters

Fix the agreement mistake

master

show examples

in sports, and topped in his exams.

Besides

this

, he had done multiple short duration courses in

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

personality development and

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

physical education. I would request you to consider his resume for the same as he is having five years of experience of being a

sport

Change the noun form

sports

show examples

instructor.

Moreover

, he was

also

working as a coach for athletes to

trained

Wrong verb form

train

show examples

them for the national level because of

this

reason I think he is

most

Correct article usage

the most

show examples

suitable candidate for our school. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Kainat Anwar

Submitted by ka261991 on Sat Nov 06 2021

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

192 words

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

4.5
band
Some argue that patriotism is the primary cause of wars globally. Others feel that it serves to prevent less ethical politicians from running a country and starting wars. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Wars have increased by a great deal recently, primarily because of patriotism. However, a politician who is devouted to his own country will likely be against violence and bloodshed. In this essay, I will discuss why I agree with this notion and form a conclusion.
6
band
There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, students are facing difficulties managing all subjects simultaneously with academic work. While removing non-academic subjects will bring benefits such as better concentration on academic works, it will also depend on their creativity.
5.5
band
Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that arts education is as significant as the study of other subjects, especially for primary students. I completely agree with this viewpoint because some educational content could be better illustrated in the forms of arts, and the study of arts is one key consideration which fosters all-rounded growth of young students.
7.5
band
In some countries, the number of shootings increase becausee many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays lots of individuals are buying guns to keep at their residential places due to which the ratio of murders suspected through gun shoot has increased in some nations. In my opinion , I totally agree with this statement and I will explain in detail to support my viewpoint.
8
band
In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In many places, children are involved in various types of employment. Some would say that this is utterly wrong, while others are of the opinion that this is fine because it prepares them for the workforce. I agree with the latter point and will show that, despite some concerns about its effect on education, working at a young age can enhance a person’s character.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!

You are working in a school. Write a letter to the Principal to recommend your friend for the position of sports teacher in your school. In your letter – say how long you have known him/her – describe his/her qualifications – explain why you think he/she would be suitable for the job.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

Some argue that patriotism is the primary cause of wars globally. Others feel that it serves to prevent less ethical politicians from running a country and starting wars. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, the number of shootings increase becausee many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+