You are working in a school. Write a letter to the Principal to recommend your friend for the position of sports teacher in your school. In your letter – say how long you have known him/her – describe his/her qualifications – explain why you think he/she would be suitable for the job.

Dear
Mrs.
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Jones, I am writing
this
letter to you to give the reference of one of my friends who is better suitable for the current opening of the
sport
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teacher in our school. I have been in touch
to
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him from
my
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younger age as we both studied together at the same school.
Furthermore
, we have done our college together, but
then
he moved to another city for
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higher education. Apart from
this
, he is my neighbour so often when he visits the town he sees me, and we
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together. He is
well qualified
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man as he had done
masters
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in sports, and topped in his exams.
Besides
this
, he had done multiple short duration courses in
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personality development and
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physical education. I would request you to consider his resume for the same as he is having five years of experience of being a
sport
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instructor.
Moreover
, he was
also
working as a coach for athletes to
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them for the national level because of
this
reason I think he is
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suitable candidate for our school. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Kainat Anwar
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