You have had a problem with your next-door neighbour. You have not been able to speak to your neighbour about this. Write a letter to this neighbour. In you letter - explain the problem - suggest a solution - say what action you will take if the situation does not improve.

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Dear Mr Sam, I am writing

this

letter to bring to your attention that I am facing

problem

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a problem

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with your high music as I try to speak to you on

this

, but not able to talk on the same, You play music during

night

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the night

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which

make

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makes

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disturb

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disturbed

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as I am not able to sleep.

Moreover

, the guests

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who arrive

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arrive

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arriving

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your house makes

loud

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a loud

the loud

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chaotic

sound

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sounds

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, and sometimes I feel like some issues are there that lead me into the thought of approaching you.

Furthermore

, it is difficult for me to get up early because I could not able to have sound sleep, and I always get late for my office. I request you to please either put the volume low and enjoy your time or try to plan these carnivals on weekends

instead

of weekdays. Apart from

this

, you can keep your windows and doors

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closed

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, and try to have

party

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a party

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inside the house

instead

of lawn. I will be grateful to you if you do the same. In case you continue to follow the same procedure

then

I have to approach

society

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the society

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community and raise the issue for the same. I wait for your prompt service. Yours sincerely Kainat Anwar

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

202 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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