Some people believe that It is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, Businesses and academic worlds. Other believe that some information is so important and valuable To be shared. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
A group of people agree about sharing all of the
information
which you have about science or business with others
and they maintain that It could be a good idea. While others
would say that although
giving some data to others
is fine, most of them are much more important to everybody could access them without paying. For me, even though some of them must be hide
from Change the verb form
be hidden
public
, it's a really proper decision to share different knowledge with Add an article
the public
others
.
Sharing information
with others
has several benefits. Firstly
, It might give a chance to scientists to discover something new by using them. In some cases, by putting some hypothesizes together, something different might come to hand and it's a huge development in different types of sciences. Secondly
, students
can help each other by doing this
in school. The intelligent can share some sort of knowledge about their studies with less smart ones. So, just as clever students
can review their lessons poor ones can learn them either. For example
, in my country, it is so common that teacher categorizes students
in
groups Change preposition
into
which
have clever and some weak Correct pronoun usage
that
students
so they can study together.
It is often said that some datas
are so important and substantial which is not right to publish them with Correct your spelling
data
others
. Such
as political or economic information
of a country. It's not logical to publish them with population. it can make some issues for government and it has really harmful effects,
if other countries use Remove the comma
apply
this
data to attack them. Also
, there are too many people who don't deserve to get some data in any area. They might just misuse these or blow them and after all of that do not even appreciate it. So, it might be wasting time and energy to explain even a single word to them.
In conclusion publishing information
have some positive effects not only for the giver,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
for person
who receives it. People can avoid sharing important news and the government can help to stop Add an article
the person
a person
this
process. Also
, they can take care about
the Change preposition
of
audiences
and they can make sure how grateful are they and after they can give those to them.Fix the agreement mistake
audience
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