Some people believe that It is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, Businesses and academic worlds. Other believe that some information is so important and valuable To be shared. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A group of people agree about sharing all of the
information
which you have about science or business with
others
and they maintain that It could be a good idea. While
others
would say that
although
giving some data to
others
is fine, most of them are much more important to everybody could access them without paying. For me, even though some of them must
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from
public
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, it's a really proper decision to share different knowledge with
others
. Sharing
information
with
others
has several benefits.
Firstly
, It might give a chance to scientists to discover something new by using them. In some cases, by putting some hypothesizes together, something different might come to hand and it's a huge development in different types of sciences.
Secondly
,
students
can help each other by doing
this
in school. The intelligent can share some sort of knowledge about their studies with less smart ones. So, just as clever
students
can review their lessons poor ones can learn them either.
For example
, in my country, it is so common that teacher categorizes
students
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groups
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have clever and some weak
students
so they can study together. It is often said that some
datas
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data
are so important and substantial which is not right to publish them with
others
.
Such
as political or economic
information
of a country. It's not logical to publish them with population. it can make some issues for government and it has really harmful effects
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if other countries use
this
data to attack them.
Also
, there are too many people who don't deserve to get some data in any area. They might just misuse these or blow them and after all of that do not even appreciate it. So, it might be wasting time and energy to explain even a single word to them. In conclusion publishing
information
have some positive effects not only for the giver
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but
also
for
person
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who receives it. People can avoid sharing important news and the government can help to stop
this
process.
Also
, they can take care
about
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the
audiences
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and they can make sure how grateful are they and after they can give those to them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • collaboration
  • innovation
  • transparency
  • accountability
  • unfair advantages
  • misuse
  • valuable
  • protected
  • monetized
  • confidentiality
  • progress
  • safeguards
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