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Summarize the informations by selecting and reporting the main feautures, and make comparisons where relevant

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The graph shows the evolutions over the period 199- 2005 of the number of foreign tourist
arrivals
, covering five different areas: South
America
, Sub-saharan Africa, South - East Asia, Central and Eastern
Europe
 and North
America
. It is noteworthy the positive trend,
that is
 the increase of the numbers of foreign tourists, in all the regions, except North
America
. There has been detected a slight decrease
of
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 international
arrivals
.
Moreover
, it is clear that Central and
Easter
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Eastern
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Europe
 have the most relevant raise indeed, the sum of foreign
traveler
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traveller
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arrivals
 almost tripled from 1990 to 2005. If North
America
 and
Europe
 have the highest figure of international tourists
arrivals
,
in
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 the other hand Sub-Saharan Africa and South
America
 are on the other side of the spectrum, even though it can be seen
that is
 present a slight and constant growth.
For instance
, Sub-Saharan Africa started in 1990 with 10
millions
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 people, and nowadays reach
the
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20
millions
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million
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. In conclusion, it is possible
forecast
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 that in a few years,
Europe
 will overtake North
America
.
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