Some people think that one should choose a job based on salary in order to provide security for the family. Do you think money is an important factor when choosing a job? What other factors should be considered?
Many
people
would argue that financial security is the principal reason for their choice of occupation. Some would Use synonyms
also
argue that money is a key motivator. Linking Words
However
, my personal belief is that whilst money is important, other Linking Words
factors
Use synonyms
also
have a significant bearing. Primarily, Linking Words
people
go out to work in order to earn money to provide for themselves and their families. As Use synonyms
such
, continued financial stability and security are important Linking Words
factors
which need to be borne in mind when looking for a new Use synonyms
job
. Without a doubt, one of the first things which Use synonyms
people
Use synonyms
Linking Words
firstly
look at when they scan Change the word
first
job
advertisements is the salary scale. If Use synonyms
this
does not meet the expectations of an individual, or more importantly at least match their current level of pay, it is highly likely that a decision will be reached that the particular position is not deemed to be suitable. Linking Words
However
, some would suggest that choosing a Linking Words
job
based solely on the salary offered is Use synonyms
short sighted
. They are likely to point to Add a hyphen
short-sighted
factors
including the satisfaction that can be gained in undertaking a rewarding position. For example, nurses and teachers carry out roles which are not always Use synonyms
well paid
. Add a hyphen
well-paid
However
, they are likely to achieve high levels of Linking Words
job
satisfaction which contributes to their intrinsic motivation. The social benefits of working are Use synonyms
also
important. Linking Words
This
gives Linking Words
people
the chance to interact socially, both in and out of the workplace. Examples of Use synonyms
this
might be the chance to talk to Linking Words
like minded
colleagues over a coffee in the staffroom or liaising with colleagues at a social occasion after work. Add a hyphen
like-minded
In addition
, the chance to work for a reputable organisation, opportunities for professional development and undertaking a role that you are committed to are Linking Words
also
other important Linking Words
factors
. Use synonyms
To conclude
, whilst some would choose remuneration as the fundamental consideration when searching for a new role, I would argue that other considerations have an equal weighting.Linking Words
Submitted by niraj.sood on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion