the local industrial village of England called Stamdorf in 1985 to 2015.

The given maps illustrate the alteration of the local industrial village of England called Stamdorf from 1985 to 2015. The general overview here is that the Stamdorf village undergoes a noticeable transformation after the construction takes place. According to the
first
, it can be seen that the river located in the centre,with there was a big factory situated to the west.the only one Main Street running through the east to the west, with the wooden bridge across the river. Stood on the right
side
of the avenue was a line of
three
small roadside inns, while on the opposite
side
there was a large field and the scatting of the plum tree. After development, in 2015,the
three
small roadside inns have been relocated to the place where the factory stood with some or tree nearby. The new industrial area has been constructed in the northwest of the old Main avenue, along with a new road with the building beside it. On the opposite
side
of the main ,avenue a new big building was built, with six buildings,
three
of them located in the southwest while the other
three
situated in the southeast. It was notable that while the remains in the same area but turned into a steel bridge, the field has been moved to the northwest bank of the river. There was a line of The tree on the left
side
of the main street.
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