The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictorials provide two-floor plans of the house. The first one shows how the space
look
at Change the verb form
looks
this
moment and the second
scheme demonstrates how it could be after the tremendous changes in the place.
As can be observed from the proposed plan, the living room and the kitchen can benefit significantly. For instance
, the internal wall together with
the internal door which is located with
the living room should be demolished. Undoubtedly, it will increase the space a lot. Change preposition
in
Moreover
, the internal doors in the kitchen have to be relocated and placed near the entrance door. In addition
, it should have double size.
As a result
of improving the specious place, the stairs have to become wider in order to give a welcoming feeling in the house. The kitchen furniture has to be installed next
to the window and reminds the form of the building.
To sum up
, these large renovations will not only enlarge the house, nonetheless
bring more light there.Correct word choice
but nonetheless
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