The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2040 and 2060. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2040 and 2060.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts illustrate the world production forecasts displayed
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five main fields in 2040 and after 20 years in 2060.
Overall
, there is no large difference between the 20 years given.
While
materials and agriculture comprise the smaller amount in both years, manufacturing and services correspond to the biggest proportion.
Furthermore
, the
last
two sectors are responsible for more than half of the global economy. With regards to the two most important sectors , the percentage of services will slightly increase
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% from 40%
whereas
the manufacturing industry will rise from 31% to 33% in the period which is given.
In addition
, info-com tech and materials will grow 1% from 15% to 16% and from 3% to 4%, respectively.
By contrast
, crops will shrink 75% almost disappearing between 2040 to 2060 from only 4 % to 1%, and electricity will decrease steadily from 7% to 5 % during the 20 years-period.
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