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Many things that used to be done by in the home by hand are now being done by machines does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages.

#home #hand #machines #development
Nowadays, more and more
people
 understand that
smartphones
has
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 become an
essantial
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essential
 part of their life. Doing a project about it I have found some data and come up with the
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 that touch on a question of the most common things for what
people
use
 their
smartphones
. Looking at the details, the most popular option connects with communication. Approximately three
quaters
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quarters
use
 their
smartphones
 for sending emails.
On the contrary
, the least popular is
option
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 of paying for purchases, which is quite surprising. Another important thing to mention is that around 78 per cent of
people
use
 their phones to make calls. It is absolutely
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, but most
people
 prefer to send emails. Maybe, because it is faster. And around a half
use
 phones to
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 games. I think
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 it is a nice opportunity to relax and change
focus
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 of your mind. One problem that can be connected with using
smartphones
 is
time
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 we spend
in
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 the Internet or social media.
However
, there is a possible solution to
this
 problem.
People
 have to control the time that they spend
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 their gadgets. Of course, we cannot imagine our life without
Internet
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, but we need to understand what kind of influence the phone has on us. To sum everything up, I can say that
smartphones
 can help us in every part of our life and they give us a lot of opportunities. But everything should be in reason.
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