Which would you choose: a high-paying job with long hours that would give you a little time with family and friends or a lower-paying job with shorter hours that would give you more time with family and friends? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.

Teaching is very much important for
development
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Child
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. Nowadays, some people believe that
children
should be taught at home while others do not agree with the statement as they think
school
is
also
a necessity. In my opinion, it is important to go to
school
because education grasped from
school
have higher chances to
last
long.
Firstly
,
Children
taught at home would lack some opportunities to evolve. They would circulate in the boundaries and never try
to
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to do new things.
For instance
, If a
child
is playing a physical activity task and does not know what to do
further
, they would ask their tutor rather
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comparing to others and rectifying out and trying again.
This
would not be the case if a
child
was
a the
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school
.
Secondly
,
Child
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children
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would learn to interact and would be more active in
school
. New
activites
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activities
to boost physical as well as mental
skill
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skills
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are carried by
school
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the school
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which
also
consist of teaming up with another student and finishing the task.
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, Giant Puzzle solving can boost up
the
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both skills and
also
teaming up with a student would create a self-learning of how to socialize.
Hence
, teaching is important but going to
school
and getting
education
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plays a crucial role. To Conclude, Many believe that
child
's development is best when
children
is
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taught at home but, I strongly disagree
to
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this
statement as it is important to go to
school
where they can learn new things and with the help of
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children
get updated knowledge.
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