Nowadays many people choose to be self- employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
In the modern world, there are many approaches for
people
to select for working. Self-employed becomes more popular among many people
because of the higher salary and the more independence. However
, there are some drawbacks of being self-employed that should
be aware of.
On one hand, working as a freelance can make more money than working for a company or organization because the more Correct pronoun usage
one should
dedicate
to your Change the form of the verb
dedicated
work
, the more direct income you received. Without unfair sharing or discrimination, all of the profits belong to you. For example
, when you work
as a
employee for Change the article
an
the
organization, the monthly salary that you received depends on not only your Correct article usage
an
work
but also
your boss decision. This
can be implied that if you are not your boss favorite
ones, you can easily receive Change the spelling
favourite
the
unfair amount of money. Correct article usage
an
Moreover
, being self-employed can provide you more
freedom. When you are your own boss, you can manage whatever you want while it is impossible for you to do Change preposition
with more
this
when you are under control
of the company. Add an article
the control
For instance
, any ideas you create are acceptable and will be
Change the verb form
be further developed
be further developing
further
develop unlike the previous one when you are an employee and it is rejected by your organization.
On the other hand
, when working on your
own self, you have to take full Correct pronoun usage
apply
responsibilities
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responsibility
of
all risks. Change preposition
for
This
will make you have to struggle with the
financial problems in the beginning. Correct article usage
apply
This
may be the main Correct pronoun usage
These
causes
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cause
which
Correct pronoun usage
that
leads
to Change the verb form
lead
the
bankruptcy in the future. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, investment in clothes, you have to follow the global trend and have to be up to date in every aspect in order to make a profit for this
investment. When you be out of date, you are one step backwards than
any other Change preposition
from
companies
. Fix the agreement mistake
company
In addition
, some people
good
at their technical skills Add a missing verb
are good
such
as repairing mechanical products but they lack of
Remove the preposition
apply
the
administration knowledge which is the essential thing for running the business. Correct article usage
apply
Therefore
, it will indirectly harm the work
that they have done.
In conclusion, due to the freedom and the more money, people
tend to become working as
Change preposition
apply
a
freelance. Correct article usage
apply
Nevertheless
, before choosing, they have to aware
of the disadvantages Add a missing verb
be aware
such
as risks and lack of administrative knowledge.Submitted by Varaiphand on
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