Nowadays many people choose to be self- employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

In the modern world, there are many approaches for
people
to select for working. Self-employed becomes more popular among many
people
because of the higher salary and the more independence.
However
, there are some drawbacks of being self-employed that
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be aware of. On one hand, working as a freelance can make more money than working for a company or organization because the more
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to your
work
, the more direct income you received. Without unfair sharing or discrimination, all of the profits belong to you.
For example
, when you
work
as
a
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employee for
the
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organization, the monthly salary that you received depends on not only your
work
but
also
your boss decision.
This
can be implied that if you are not your boss
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ones, you can easily receive
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unfair amount of money.
Moreover
, being self-employed can provide you
more
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freedom. When you are your own boss, you can manage whatever you want while it is impossible for you to do
this
when you are under
control
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of the company.
For instance
, any ideas you create are acceptable and will
be
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be further developed
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further
develop unlike the previous one when you are an employee and it is rejected by your organization.
On the other hand
, when working on
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own self, you have to take full
responsibilities
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of
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all risks.
This
will make you have to struggle with
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financial problems in the beginning.
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may be the main
causes
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which
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leads
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to
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bankruptcy in the future.
For instance
, investment in clothes, you have to follow the global trend and have to be up to date in every aspect in order to make a profit for
this
investment. When you be out of date, you are one step backwards
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any other
companies
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company
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.
In addition
, some
people
good
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at their technical skills
such
as repairing mechanical products but they lack
of
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the
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administration knowledge which is the essential thing for running the business.
Therefore
, it will indirectly harm the
work
that they have done. In conclusion, due to the freedom and the more money,
people
tend to become working
as
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a
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freelance.
Nevertheless
, before choosing, they have to
aware
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be aware
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of the disadvantages
such
as risks and lack of administrative knowledge.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Autonomy
  • Financial instability
  • Job security
  • Self-employed
  • Technological advancements
  • Digital marketing
  • Remote work tools
  • Work-life balance
  • Healthcare benefits
  • Retirement plans
  • Higher earnings
  • Personal passion
  • Flexibility
  • Workload
  • Stress levels
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