Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that in today ‘s world subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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people
believe that nowadays do friends sort of
sciences
and technologies are much more important listens to teach in classes. I would follow the
second
statement.
To begin
with, teaching history to students is a good way to keep the culture and bygone of a country alive.
This
means, when children learn several events or happenings which their country and previous generation had been engaged with them, they can memorize them and when they grow up and beget their own children they will explain all those lessons to them.
As a result
, all these cultures will pass down to the
next
generation and
this
circle would continue.
For example
, my parent always tells some story about what had happened in the 1980 war in my city which they had learned in school.
Besides
,
past
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of each
people
is a part of their identity. It's really valuable and important to have some information about their background. They can find out about their ancestors, wars which might happen in past, the countries which were their enemies and use them in
present
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time.
Although
, history is a necessary lesson at school, there are some subjects which are more useful and popular
between
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students. Today, technology and everything which are related to it, are so famous all around the world. There are too many job opportunities for
people
who are specialized in technology or computer.
For example
, in the capital of ,Iran most of the youngs have studied computer or IT
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because most of the companies are related to
this
science. So, they always look for
people
who are experts at
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the computer
a computer
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computer
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computers
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.
Secondly
, a huge percentage of students find
sciences
like mathematics, biology and chemistry much more interesting. They might believe that there are so extended and infinity.
Also
, they are the subjects which include present and future. So they might be more lively
sciences
. In conclusion, even though having information about history would be necessary,
sciences
such
as physics or math are not only so interesting and
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, but
also
necessary and helpful for the world.
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  • sense of identity
  • cultural heritage
  • critical thinking
  • analytical skills
  • informed citizenship
  • societal issues
  • modern economies
  • climate change
  • healthcare
  • innovation
  • job creation
  • competitive advantage
  • global market
  • problem-solving skills
  • logical reasoning
  • technological literacy
  • digital age
  • technical skills
  • digital competence
  • active participation
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