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Some People think one should stay all their life in the same job, whereas others advocate changing jobs from time to time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Undoubtedly, change is the law of nature.
However
,
this
 became a debatable issue whether or not
one
 should have to try new opportunity because, some folks opin that it's really good to explore new
work
 environment while
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 others give importance to
work
 at
one
place
. I will Discuss both these views along with my perspective. On
one
 hand, some individual's
prefer
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 continue to
work
 at
regular
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place
 as it's very convenient to
work
 there because employees know very well about their colleagues and owner as they found it difficult to adjust
in
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new
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work space
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.
Moreover
, some Masses
scared
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 to lose
there
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their
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job
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jobs
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 for the searching
of
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new
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a new
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one
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.
For instance
, my co-worker told me that she is working at the same
place
from
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last
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the last
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 18 years because she is not feeling confident to explore new
work
area
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 and staff.
On the other hand
,some people really like to change their
work
 with the passage of time, as they want to take different
job
 responsibilities and
ofcourse
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of course
 to earn more money. In
this
 modern era, mostly the young generation is looking towards the bright future as
there
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 desires are more so, they always acception highly paid jobs.
Moreover
, it
also
enhance
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the
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knowledge as people get the chance to explore new items through
new
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job
. In
conclude
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,
although
 working at the old
place
 is more comfortable but, I personally believe that
try
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 new
job
 makes a person happy.
Besides
this
, they will get a chance to learn something new and unique.
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