Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Being bad circumstance may bring out
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success in the future, whilst
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some others
tend to let it flow away by accepting. As many
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I have undergone, I strongly believe in making effort to escape the
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poverty
. In
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advantaged family open
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opportunities for individual easily lead to living under the tree.
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, having built a solid educational background, we will
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seize our chance. Little do we know that so many
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out there had made effort to
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avoid
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condition, most obvious is Japan that has suffered from
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disaster like a clockwork , gains lots of economic and social
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achievements
just for their attempt.
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, confronting with the unfortunate
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curriculum
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. Getting on our
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fate will gradually eliminate
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out
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this
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society since many new things
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unless we
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these new things, we will bear failure. Not only so but
also
for the benefit of the community. Having made enough effort for our world, we could enable
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to live
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a better-off life.
Moreover
, motivating has a crucial benefit that can
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our knowledge and
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up a relaxing soul. Imagining those who live in poverty, they
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in that narrow situation till the end.
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but not least, some
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may need
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compliance but I think it
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undoubtedly
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true when we
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the
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active mood and never say never.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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