You own an old item that you think is valuable and would like to sell. Write a letter to the owner of an antique’s shop. In your letter: explain how you found the shop describe the item that you would like to sell say how much you would like to sell the item for

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Smith, The reason I am writing to you is the antique watch which was received from my great grandmother. After reviewing all the great comments on your website, especially, regarding the service you offer for your customers,I decide to ask for your help in selling my item. Without a doubt,

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much means a lot to me though I could not wear

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as it's too old-fashioned.

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, I decided to donate the money that will come by selling

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accessory. Some of the main features of

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watch include gold colour with a brilliant diamond at the centre,

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, it will be needed good maintenance. I would appreciate it if you could sell

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valuable souvenir for a reasonable price. Since the mentioned item not only has a sentimental value but

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will be used for charity, I prefer to sell it for more than

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dollars. Please let me know if you require more information. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Dorna Sadeghi

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

170 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

antique shop
valuable item
historical significance
condition
restoration
market value
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appraise
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You own an old item that you think is valuable and would like to sell. Write a letter to the owner of an antique’s shop. In your letter: explain how you found the shop describe the item that you would like to sell say how much you would like to sell the item for

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.

The working week should be shorted and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that a person improves their intellectual skills more when doing group activities. To what extent do you agree? Use specific details and examples to explain your view.

Plan A below shows a health centre in 2005. Plan B shows the same place in the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.