You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much. Write a letter to the restaurant to thank them. Mention the food, service and the atmosphere. Also suggest any improvements to make things better.

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to let you know that I hosted my birthday party on the 25th of march at your hotel,The Royal Gardens.I am really thankful to your staff for hosting

such

a memorable party,which was enjoyed by friends,who specially flew from Dubai to be with me on my special day. The A-la-carte menu was well planned,which included a variety of healthy oil-free dishes as well,which impressed my health freak friends.The friendly staff,who catered to our demands needs special commendation for their hard work and efficiency.The ambience was very pleasant and comfortable, especially as the banquet room was facing a huge garden area with lots of flowers. But,I could like to suggest you open more parking spaces,which caused a great inconvenience for us.We had to park near the exit of the hotel and walk all the way up.Other than

this

,it was overall a wonderful experience. Thank you for your service. yours faithfully Rehana

Submitted by rehanafees on Thu Nov 11 2021

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