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Percentage of UK people who consumed daily recommended amount of fruit and vegetable in 2002, 2006 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The bar chart illustrates that how many fruits and vegetables were consumed by the people of
UK
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the UK
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 in the years 2002,2006 and 2010
percentage wise
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. Overall, the amount of
fruit
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 and
vegetable
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eaten
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are eaten
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 by
men
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 and
children
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 experience a downward trend,
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whereas
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where as
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whereas
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 women had ingested
greater
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a greater
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 amount of
fruit
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 and
vegetable
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 than
men
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 and
children
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throughout
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through out
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 the period.
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, all the years had some fluctuations as well. At the beginning of the period, the number of
fruit
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vegetable
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 consumed by women was about 25% which increased up to 7% in the year 2006
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, it experienced a downward trend of approximately 6% after four years.
Men
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 and
children
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 who had eaten 22% and 11% of
fruit
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 and
vegetable
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 in 2002 increased up to almost 26% and 18% in 2006. It again decreased to about 24% and 16% respectively. The bar chart shows that women preferred to consume more
fruit
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 and
vegetable
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 than
men
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children
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