Write a letter to local authorities by requesting additional sports facilities for your age in your area. Mention about the current sports facilities available. What kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced? How the new sports facilities would be a help for the people in your age group.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Prabhjot Kaur, a resident of Kamal Park, Aman Nagar, Jalandhar. I am working as an Accounts Manager in HDFC Bank, Phagwara. I am writing

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letter to draw your attention to my colony and request you to provide sports facilities for the young people. To commence with, there are multifarious sports centres in New Aman Nagar but in my locality, there are only a few. Children play Cricket, Football etc. on the ground of the Government High School.

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, there is no facility available for teenagers to spend some time after office or college to exercise and play. Sir, I would suggest there is an open space

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to the school where people through their waste products and that place becomes a dumping spot.

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area is under the corporation of the city.

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would be an ideal area for opening sports fields

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as an indoor stadium for Badminton and Table Tennis and an outdoor stadium for physical exercise. I would really appreciate it if you could utilize that place as

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would be very beneficial not only for adults but

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for the youngsters who have a very sedentary lifestyle. Thank you. Yours faithfully, Prabhjot Kaur

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