The tendency for human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashions in clothes and other consumer goods. To what extent you agree or disagree?

Individuals prefer to duplicate others’ styles for clothing and consumption of products or services.

This

essay moderately agrees with

this

view as the customer’s age is a vital factor, who will be persuaded by

these famous personnel

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via advertising ,which,

subsequently

, assist to decide whether to copy or not in case of aged groups. To initiate with, young population follow others when they decide to make

decision

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a decision

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regarding

purchase

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the purchase

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of fashionable or consuming

items

. These choices are fueled through advertising, which is persuaded by the celebs. Most

of

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the

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apply

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people especially at

young

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a young

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age believe in these well-known personalities.

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,

these

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young population is gullible in nature, which assists these manufacturing companies to utilise celebrities fame to the fullest.

For instance

, Shakib-Al-Ahsan is a Bangladeshi cricketer whose strengths

main

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source of the secret

that is

telecast for various consumable products.

Therefore

, the age factor does have an impact to persuade or copy celeb for consumption of regular purchases and fashions.

In contrast

, Senior citizen never tries to copy or

influenced

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be influenced

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by any

sorts

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of commercials from stars. As they are well-experienced, which helps them to identify their actual demands.

Therefore

, old people prefer durability when consuming clothes or

benefit

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derive

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derived

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from

items

that possess when choosing to buy consumer goods rather than copying any superstars.

For example

, sweets are not consumed by most of the diabetic patients of Bangladesh even though these are advertised by the superstars due to physical issues that

it

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they

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could create. To conclude, our consumption patterns are mostly

depended

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dependent

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on copies and motivation from stars, which is influencing huge sales for the producers of these

items

.

However

, senior citizens can only be influenced by the quality of these

items

rather than these influential person’s presence in the advertisement and motivate individuals to consume it.