The tendency for human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashions in clothes and other consumer goods. To what extent you agree or disagree?
Individuals prefer to duplicate others’ styles for clothing and consumption of products or services.
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view as the customer’s age is a vital factor, who will be persuaded by Linking Words
these famous personnel
via advertising ,which, Change the determiner
this famous personnel
subsequently
, assist to decide whether to copy or not in case of aged groups.
To initiate with, young population follow others when they decide to make Linking Words
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regarding Add an article
a decision
the decision
purchase
of fashionable or consuming Add an article
the purchase
items
. These choices are fueled through advertising, which is persuaded by the celebs. Most Use synonyms
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apply
the
people especially at Correct article usage
apply
young
age believe in these well-known personalities. Add an article
a young
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these
young population is gullible in nature, which assists these manufacturing companies to utilise celebrities fame to the fullest. Correct determiner usage
this
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the main
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telecast for various consumable products. Linking Words
Therefore
, the age factor does have an impact to persuade or copy celeb for consumption of regular purchases and fashions.
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In contrast
, Senior citizen never tries to copy or Linking Words
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by any Add a missing verb
be influenced
sorts
of commercials from stars. As they are well-experienced, which helps them to identify their actual demands. Fix the agreement mistake
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Therefore
, old people prefer durability when consuming clothes or Linking Words
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benefits
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derived
items
that possess when choosing to buy consumer goods rather than copying any superstars. Use synonyms
For example
, sweets are not consumed by most of the diabetic patients of Bangladesh even though these are advertised by the superstars due to physical issues that Linking Words
it
could create.
To conclude, our consumption patterns are mostly Correct pronoun usage
they
depended
on copies and motivation from stars, which is influencing huge sales for the producers of these Replace the word
dependent
items
. Use synonyms
However
, senior citizens can only be influenced by the quality of these Linking Words
items
rather than these influential person’s presence in the advertisement and motivate individuals to consume it.Use synonyms
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