Write a letter to local authorities by requesting additional sports facilities for your age in your area. Mention about the current sports facilities available. What kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced? How the new sports facilities would be a help for the people in your age group.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to you to request you to add some sports facilities in my area.

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there are some fields available for playing games

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as football, volleyball, and cricket, they are not properly maintained. Apart from

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, in the society park, there is a badminton court, and people love to play over there. I request you to please provide a basketball court as we had made a basketball team, composing people of my age group.

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, please do make some jogging paths in a park so that we can do some jogging and running. I will be grateful to you if you facilitate us with these additional facilities because people of my age are concerned about their health, and

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will be a fruitful cause.

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, playing games

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as basketball will make us fit, as well as, we have a team and thinking to participate in the inter-state competition. I wait for your prompt service. Yours faithfully, Kainat Anwar

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A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

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All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

167 words

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