You will be celebrating your son’s 6th birthday next week. You want to invite one of your colleagues to attend the birthday party. Write an invitation letter to this college. In your letter, • invite your colleague to your son’s birthday party • give details of the party and its date and time • say how happy you and your family would be to have him/her at the party

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Dear Mr Johnson I hope

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letter finds you and your family in good health. I am writing

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letter to invite you to my son’s birthday party. My family and I will be glad to see you.

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will be my son's 5th birthday party. It will take place in the

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Activity Centre, which is situated opposite the Opera and Ballet Theatre, in the city centre. The party will start at 11 am.

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centre provides some fun activities for

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and their parents, which include puppet performances and a magic show.

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, during all time three clowns will amuse guests and play with

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. Cake, pizza, fruits and light refreshments will be offered for participants.

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, I have arranged the cowboy's show, which will begin at the noon. I hope you do not have any other plans on that day. We would love for you to attend. I am confident, our

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will enjoy spending time together

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because they are at the same ages. Yours sincerely, Bim

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

171 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

heartfelt invitation
celebrate
occasion
significance
venue
entertainment
appreciate
memorable
RSVP
reiterate
looking forward
warm closing

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