Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town , has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter Suggest how you could help her in her home Say why you would like to do this work Explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear madam, I am writing to express my enthusiasm to assist you in your domestic work. I am able to aid you in various parts of your house in a range from cooking to reading Persian books for you. I have taken a lot of cooking courses and surfed the net to find diverse recipes for delicious foods.

Moreover

, I am a very neat and organized person due to

this

fact, you can peace of mind about your living area. I am interested to get

this

job because of some fortified grounds. The

first

point is that I am going to take the IELTS exam

year, I would like to improve my speaking skill by communicating with you. The

second

justification has to do with financial issues. I am a student at University if I could not catch a suitable career not only I can not pay my tuition fees but

also

I face problems with accommodation costs. I have classes in the morning since I am a student as I mentioned but I am available everyday evenings of the week except Friday. If I am allowed to recommend, I would work free for a month and

then

make your decision for continuing our cooperation. I look forward to receiving your kind reply. Sincerely yours, Z.Laripour

Submitted by z_l1992 on Sat Nov 13 2021

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Domestic chores
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