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Write about the following topic. Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, the image of an organization is an important issue that an entrepreneur should be concerned about.
Thus
, some companies tell their employees to dress in formal dress. While others argue that the outfit is not a vital point because it is not relevant to the quality of 
work
.
However
, both views and the examples will be outlined in the following paragraphs, before the conclusion, which includes my opinion, is reached. On the one hand, it is undeniable that good-looking people always impress others. As in business terms, a person in a formal dress may attract more customers. To be explained, if you
work
 at an agency and have to do the pitching to compete with others, clients often choose a reliable person to take care of their project.
That is
 the reason why the outfits play a big role in making opportunities for the company.
On the other hand
,
smart
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 dressing may not suit some kinds of jobs.
For example
, graphic design, Social media executive, creative, production-related worker and
the
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other jobs that
not
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to
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.
Furthermore
, concerning too much about dressing every day or wearing uncomfortable clothes could cause more stress to them.
This
 may lead to a lower quality of
work
. To summarise, there are both advantages and disadvantages of dressing formally while working in the company.
However
, I agree with the latter statement that workers should wear what is appropriate for their job and focus on the
work
 more than the outfit that sometimes no one sees.
Finally
, it is the duty of the director to manage and balance between the presentation and the quality of
work
 of their business.
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