Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, people are facing with many health issues that relating to consuming foods with sugar. There is argument suggesting that this problem can be fixed by raising prices of those products. Personally, I am not convinced that this is an appropriate option to do and there are other alternatives that are more reasonable. It is true that sugary products cause negative influences on health condition, for instance, obesity and diabetes, which are rather difficult to deal with. Therefore, encouraging people to reduce or cut those foods in their meals are becoming a necessary thing to do. Some people believe that by increasing the price can limit the demand of those products. However, price should be decided by the market itself and a rough intervention has never been a positive method to be applied and can lead to other economic problems, such as inflation, which in turn can harm the market overall. Instead, raising the perception of healthier diet and benefits gained from it can be a more reasonable approach to do. In many countries, there are campaigns that encourage people against unhealthy products and increase acknowledgement about the negative impacts of being obesity, which can cause heart disease and even death. As a result, people will change their eating habit and then starting to consume less or non sugar products. In conclusion, I believe that it is more sustainable if changing eating style by changing awareness. Hence, it is a better choice to focus on educating knowledge of healthy lifestyle.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • health problems
  • manufactured food and drink products
  • sugary products
  • excessive sugar consumption
  • discourage
  • promote
  • healthier choices
  • reduce
  • increased taxes
  • fund
  • health education
  • prevention programs
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