Many countries are worried about the damage to the economy that coronavirus is causing. Give some examples of how coronavirus is damaging the economy and suggest possible soTlutions.

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of our
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affected
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due to Covid-19. The countries
economy
inlunced
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influenced
the most because of the
virus
.
Therefore
, the
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government
governments
have
concern
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about the results of the
virus
.
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with, the majority of countries prevent
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tourism.
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, the
economy
harmed
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because
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generate
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of
the
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it depends on the
the
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many that
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form
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the
tourest
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tourist
. Dubi as an example, since the
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pandemic
begain
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began
begin
,
less
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people goes there.
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, the town
economy
effected
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affected
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.
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,
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enormous
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proportion of the
badget
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budget
put in
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reduce the
posibility
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possibility
of taking the
virus
. to illustrate, a
statistec
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statistic
statistics
done
on
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the middle east
displaed
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displayed
that the
majoity
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majority
of the
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counties spent more than 5
milions
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million
millions
in
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order
to save people life.
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of that and
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because
it
happend
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happened
happen
happens
suddenly, the
economy
effected
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affected
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badly.
However
, one way to tackle the damage in
economy
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an economy
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that
happend
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happened
happen
happens
due to the
virus
is to create other
funds
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fund
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resourses
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resources
by using the internet. By using the internet, many things can be created
easly
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easily
, and
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the
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opportunity
to
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slove
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the problems is a good idea.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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