With the increasing demand for energy sources of oil and gas, people should look for sources of oil and gas in remote and untouched natural places. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages of damaging such areas？

Nowadays people

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about an increase

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the amount of

oil

and

gas

that are used because of

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number of population. Some people think that finding new

sources

of

oil

and

gas

in restricted sites, whereas

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behaviour is too selfish. In

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essay, I will discuss

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and negative effects and explain why the demerits offset merits. Clearly, there are numerous reasons about damaging areas is advantageous.

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, the behaviour is for everyone. The

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the quantity of

oil

and

gas

geometrically and it might be difficult to bear forever.

Therefore

, it needs to look for resources and obtain

oil

and

gas

for the future.

Moreover

, recently the price of

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is increasing all over the world. If countries develop several sites and gain enough amount of

oil

, the cost for limited resources will decrease notably.

Nevertheless

, I contend that looking for

sources

of

oil

and

gas

affects

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for the world.

First

of all, wild fauna and flora can be

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during

oil

drilling.

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already affects the environment disadvantageous but if people try to gain

oil

and

gas

more and more, it can harm the ecology.

Furthermore

, the government encourage to

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natural

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gas

, wind force, solar force and so on. Using natural

sources

such

as them, the public

live

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naturally and try to prevent the circumstance of global warming. In conclusion,

although

it is easy to look for sites because the amount of

oil

and

gas

that be used in life is declining, we need to search

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sources

and use them rather than

oil

drilling.