With the increasing demand for energy sources of oil and gas, people should look for sources of oil and gas in remote and untouched natural places. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages of damaging such areas?

Nowadays people
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about an increase
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the amount of
oil
and
gas
that are used because of
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number of population. Some people think that finding new
sources
of
oil
and
gas
in restricted sites, whereas
this
behaviour is too selfish. In
this
essay, I will discuss
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and negative effects and explain why the demerits offset merits. Clearly, there are numerous reasons about damaging areas is advantageous.
Firstly
, the behaviour is for everyone. The
public
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the quantity of
oil
and
gas
geometrically and it might be difficult to bear forever.
Therefore
, it needs to look for resources and obtain
oil
and
gas
for the future.
Moreover
, recently the price of
oi
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oil
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is increasing all over the world. If countries develop several sites and gain enough amount of
oil
, the cost for limited resources will decrease notably.
Nevertheless
, I contend that looking for
sources
of
oil
and
gas
affects
negative
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for the world.
First
of all, wild fauna and flora can be
hurted
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during
oil
drilling.
The society
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already affects the environment disadvantageous but if people try to gain
oil
and
gas
more and more, it can harm the ecology.
Furthermore
, the government encourage to
develop
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natural
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gas
, wind force, solar force and so on. Using natural
sources
such
as them, the public
live
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naturally and try to prevent the circumstance of global warming. In conclusion,
although
it is easy to look for sites because the amount of
oil
and
gas
that be used in life is declining, we need to search
new
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sources
and use them rather than
oil
drilling.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • energy sources
  • industrial growth and development
  • economic benefits
  • job creation
  • revenues
  • technological advancements
  • extraction process
  • biodiversity
  • natural habitats
  • indigenous communities
  • displacement
  • traditional way of life
  • environmental disasters
  • oil spills
  • long-lasting effects
  • widespread effects
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