In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment what factors may have caused this situation and what in your opinion can or should be done about it give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
A
number
of loopholes in Use synonyms
labor
law and long-term education policies have resulted in Change the spelling
labour
current
situation.
Educational attitudes and some laws are contributing factors in Add an article
the current
unpleasant
situation of unemployment. In the Add an article
the unpleasant
first
place, a lack of balance between the Linking Words
number
of alumni and openings might be considered as an effective reason Use synonyms
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for
in
vast unemployment. Correct your spelling
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of former university students overweighs the Use synonyms
number
of professional vacancies. Use synonyms
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policy makers
, especially the ones who are in charge of adjusting Correct your spelling
policymakers
educational
system, should have definite statistics of potential industrial, medical and other professional occupations in order to admit enough students to the universities. By applying Correct article usage
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this
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number
of university graduates and vacancies will be congruent. As an added remedy, a brand new Use synonyms
labor
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labour
over-time
working to their workforces. Correct your spelling
overtime
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, employers will be obliged to recruit Linking Words
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a sufficient
the sufficient
number
of degree owners that obviously decreases Use synonyms
unemployment
rate.
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