Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe that actions can be taken to bring about the change. Discuss both and give your opinion.

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Plants and animals have been experiencing

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reductions in their numbers by inhuman activities which can be significantly reversed by taking some measures. Some people believe in the favour of the above-mentioned statement

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, others deny it. In

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essay, I will narrate my views after describing both views. Conventional philosophers

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have an opinion that it is impossible to reduce

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actions. Overpopulation, Animal proteins, skin products and Research experiments are the root cause of

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led to the cutting of plants whereas demands for cosmetic products and Research on uncurable diseases resulted in experimentation based on animal killing. In

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way, they think that it is unavoidable.

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, exploitation of flora and fauna can be prevented by implementing certain policies and measures.

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policies which recommend the use of recyclable and reusable plant products. Scientists have discovered proteins that

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not require animal hunting. Nowadays, human beings are willingly donating their organs which can be used for animal experimentation after their death. I

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opine in a similar manner. To conclude, some conventional thinkers are still in doubt that

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activities cannot be restricted due to the need of human life environment whereas modern scientists and governments have generated hope of ray by implementing certain policies and measures , which can really produce a promising result in the reduction of plant and animal killing.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

negative impact
extinct
deforestation
pollution
habitat destruction
mitigate
reverse
stricter regulations
protected areas
endangered species
education and awareness campaigns
biodiversity
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"Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up." To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that a country will benefit greatly by a high percentage of young people going to universities. Others argue that it only leads to a higher unemployment rate. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.