Some people say that protecting the environment is the government's responsibility. Others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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believe that all masses should give preference to
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the
environment
,while few persons asked that it
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on the authority. Not merely explain both
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in the upcoming paragraphs but
also
give my opinion. To the set of wheels in motion ,
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and
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foremost reason is that all the rules
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and
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are made by the government. So, the protection of
environment
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is depend
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on that. To make it more clear when the regime
make
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the rules regarding
this
and automatically the pollution will decrease and the
environment
will
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.
For example
, in 2019, the regulation about
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was made by the administration of
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America
and in
this
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they show how to protect the
environment
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deeply,
however
, if any person cannot follow
this
rule
the police of America collect the fine from them and
also
punish them. On the flip side, people should
also
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the
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some preference to save the
environment
. Since
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they
also
to
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live in the era.
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of all, they follow the
rule
of
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.
Furthermore
, they give few views about that how we protect the
environment
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and
tell to management of there nation, meanwhile, mankind can avoid that tings ,which can harm the
environment
such
as,less use of plastic bags , reduce the use of fossil fuel.
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this
, some people make a group to inspire the masses to protect the
environment
.
For instance
, in 2020, a campaign was run by the individual of Canada and they give a lot of information about
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the
environment
.
Although
they get 65 per cent success in
this
. To conclude, according to me both are responsible to protect the
environment
.but the
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by the government because they have
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right to make
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rule
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the
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batch of
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individuals
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follow
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them.
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