Some people say that protecting the environment is the government's responsibility. Others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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believe that all masses should give preference to

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on the authority. Not merely explain both

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foremost reason is that all the rules

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are made by the government. So, the protection of

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and automatically the pollution will decrease and the

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, in 2019, the regulation about

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was made by the administration of

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punish them. On the flip side, people should

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some preference to save the

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live in the era.

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, they give few views about that how we protect the

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tell to management of there nation, meanwhile, mankind can avoid that tings ,which can harm the

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as,less use of plastic bags , reduce the use of fossil fuel.

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, some people make a group to inspire the masses to protect the

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, in 2020, a campaign was run by the individual of Canada and they give a lot of information about

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they get 65 per cent success in

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by the government because they have

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batch of

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