You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working. In your letter -Describe the work you have been doing -Explain why you can no longer do this work -Recommend another person who is interested in the work

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Dear Curator, Good day to you. I am Rotimi and I work at the City library, which is an arm of your organisation. I am responsible for recording the books borrowed by the users, keeping the books count and ensuring the borrowed books were returned.

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, I would like you to know that I won't be working with the City library again. The simple reason is

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I have to go back to school at the end of the month. I have been offered a place at Gorgon University, and I have equally decided to accept the offer. As much as I would have loved to continue working with you, the university is in another town and it would be nearly impossible to combine working and schooling together. Meanwhile, if you don't mind, I have a great colleague that can fill in the space if you want a replacement. His name is Tunde, he is a friend with a great attitude and, I am sure you going to like him. I have discussed

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with him already, and he is interested in working with you; all I need is your consent, and he can come around to see you. Do let me know what you think about the arrangement, thank you for your time. Yours Sincerely, Rotimi

Kemi111Mon Nov 15 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

217 words

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