Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates
us
the scores of three teams in four Correct pronoun usage
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season
. It can be inferred that Change to a plural noun
seasons
Team
B had a superiority in four seasons. In 2002 the team
reached peak moment with 82 points
afterards
, Correct your spelling
afterwards
untill
2005 their Correct your spelling
until
points
gradually decreased. In final
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the final
year
, even though it was only 27 points
below in comparison to first
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the first
year
the team
was still had the highest points
. Looking at the
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Team
A, we can fluctuations between seasons such
as in the first
year
it got at 5 points
one year
later it added six more. In 2004 by seeing top point with 35 one year
later it lost 27 points
. Last
but not least Team
C has never gained crucial points
. In 2002 it only
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was only
points
above the
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Team
A and the next
year
it added 5 more points
, one year
later the team
lost three points
and in the final year
it only scored five points
. To sum up, Team
B has always reached higher points
than other clubs. There is a little difference between A and C teams in 2002 and in 2003 Team
C gained more points
, in 2004 and 2005 Team
A skyrocketed and sustain its superiority.Submitted by meliike.bekcii on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite