Nowadays an increasing number of people change their career and place of residence several times during their life. Is this a positive or a negative development?

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that " Stick to one point make life dull, it's rather to be
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varied
carried
. Currently
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number of public are
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preferring
to switch their careers and living
acommodations
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accommodations
many times.
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this
trend
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merits or drawbacks and at the
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I will put my own perception regarding the matter. To embark with, It is often argued by some people that shifting the career and living place
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more plus points.
This
is because changing profession boosts
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skills. Since when an individual
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himself to
a new work
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, He can get more knowledge and
thus
more chances to improve the knacks.
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there are more opportunities for
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high
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paid job. To cite an example,
Enginners
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Engineers
are paid more in Oil sectors rather than in chemical manufacturing facilities, According to Science
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magazine
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In addition
, Moving to
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house bring
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to life.
Moreover
, Living in one place
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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