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In the past, when students did a
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 degree, they tend to
study
 in their own
country
. Nowadays, they have more
opportunity
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 to
study
 abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of
this
 development
.
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 Education plays a significant role in our lives. Students are going overseas for studies lately as they getting a number of opportunities.
However
, back in the 2000s, pupils stayed in their
country
 to get graduated. In
this
 essay, we will discuss studying abroad's merits and demerits. To start with advantages, the most benefit is people get a huge amount of scholarships to attend university overseas.
Secondly
, developed countries like the USA, Canada, UK need more immigrants to run their states.
Therefore
, they lower their English test score for
study
 and for permanent residency as well.
Lastly
, international colleges have completely different teaching method, which is more focused on practical knowledge than theoretical knowledge.
For example
, a survey shows that employers are giving higher salary those who completed their studies in a foreign.
On the other hand
, studying overseas has disadvantages too. Mainly, children feel homesick and they feel low. Coming from Asian countries like China or India to the USA or Canada, Chinese or Indian people can tend to have a cultural shock in the
first
 month.
In addition
, as we know, weather plays a vital role in human minds. Freshmen easily get sick or ill.
Moreover
, the cost of
study
 in the developed territories is way higher than in their own countries.
As a result
, the foreign student pays 3 times more money than local students of that
country
 to get the degree. In conclusion, some people still choose their own
country
 to get a degree.
Although
, attending and studying abroad university has more advantages that outweigh the demerits of studying internationally. It is a matter of preference.
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