Write a letter to your manager to nominate a person for best employee of the year award. Who is this person Why did you choose him? What is the characteristic of a good employee?
Dear Sir or Madam,
Hope I did not catch you in a busy time. I know that you have so many other important priorities at work. But the issue I want to raise here is about the new position that we should elevate for.
The reason for which I am writing
this
letter is to nominate Mr
Khaled Bayoumy the supervisor of line 3 in the procurement department in the company for the new position that you offered as a manager for the same department to who is qualified for it.
I chose Mr
Khaled according to
his responsible character Change preposition
because of
that
is clearly shown in his working side by side with his Correct pronoun usage
which
team
. Mr
Khaled is capable to appear
Change preposition
of appearing
his
intelligence in solving problems that we Change preposition
in his
are
as a Unnecessary verb
apply
team
may encounter with many viable solutions. He always shows us as a team
the respect that we deserve and encourages us to extract what is the best inside ourselves.
In my opinion, a good employee who has the ability to be the role model for the rest employees as Mr
Khaled has done.
I hope you consider this
request which is expressing not just my opinion but also
the other colleagues in our team
.
Yours faithfully,
EhssanSubmitted by semoosamasemoo6 on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph contains a clear main idea and supporting details to improve coherence and cohesion.
task achievement
Maintain a professional and formal tone throughout the letter to enhance the task response.