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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those relate to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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One of the heated issues is some people may believe that all university pupils should learn anything they want
such
 as math and art.
On the other hand
, some individuals think that they should study only subjects those are science and
technology
 because they are will gain a lot of benefits in the future. From my perspective, I believe that
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 whatever students like
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 the most important thing in these areas. In recent years, science and
technology
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popular subjects to pay attention to because
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 may develop the world in the future. In
this
 way, they can become a worker who has
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well-paid job. To illustrate, there are many organizations that need
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good workers who can research
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science and
technology
 and they are quite important for
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individuals because nowadays, they have to use
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materials in
technology
such
 as phones and computers.
On the other hand
, I believe that it is more beneficial for students to choose their majors.
Firstly
, academic qualifications are required in many professions.
For example
, it is impossible to become an artist, teacher or lawyer without having
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 the majors to learn.
As a result
, a variety of materials have access to more opportunities to do another job
that is
 might be more necessary for someone.
Secondly
, the business major is becoming increasingly competitive, and sometimes there are hundreds of applicants for one position in a company. People who do not study in the business subject will not be able to compete. For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that pupils are more likely to choose their majors to able to study what they are like
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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