You bought a TV a week ago but when you got home you discovered it did not work properly. You called customer service to report the problem but you have not yet received any help.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to report the faulty

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that I purchased from your company on Tuesday

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week. My name is John Davidson and I am one of your frequent customers. I live in Woodstock and have been using your services and buying your products for the

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11 years. On Tuesday, 12th June, I visited your store to purchase a

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. I bought a Toshiba LED

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which has the code 40L675B40. On purchasing

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, I was assured that

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was the latest model and the best there was to buy.

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, when I got home I discovered that not only did the remote controls not work but

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the quality of the picture was not as good as promised, in

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it was quite blurry. I called your customer service department immediately on Tuesday and they assured me that my

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would be replaced or fixed within two days. I am disappointed to say that

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has not happened and I have received no communication since

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. I am exceedingly displeased with both the quality of the product I purchased from your company as well as the poor service I have received since. I hope

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problem will be resolved promptly. I expect to receive a replacement

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or have my current

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repaired but only if it could be fixed within a day. I look forward to hearing back from you immediately. Yours faithfully, Mr J H Davidson

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

248 words

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You bought a TV a week ago but when you got home you discovered it did not work properly. You called customer service to report the problem but you have not yet received any help.

Fully explain your ideas

Advertising is becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?

Groups or organizations are an important part of some people's lives. Why are groups or organizations important to people? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer

One group of people prefer to live in houses that have fewer tall buildings, while others prefer the opposite. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?