You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Hi Selena, It is been too long since we have seen each other. I hope you are doing great. The reason why I'm writing

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letter to you is that I'm moving to London to study for a bachelor's degree in Physics at Durham University. The course lasts four years. So, I'm interested in doing a part-time job and really need your help on that. As a

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-year student, you're well aware that studying and living in the UK is quite expensive. You may remember my parents are retired people and they cannot support me financially. It means I've to take care of myself. Frankly speaking, I was told by your mother that you work for 20 hours a month as a bartender in catering. If it's okay, could you ask your manager if there are any open positions or ask some of your friends if they need a babysitter for their little siblings? I'd be so grateful. I hope to see you soon. Best wishes, Bella

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

167 words

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Educational aspirations
Work experience
Financial independence
Resume (or CV)
Local job market
International student
Legal requirements
Student work permit
Employment trends
Time management
Networking
A part-time position
Balance studies and work
Job hunting strategies

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