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You have just an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Say which points in the article you agree with Explain ways in which your town Centre is different from most other town centers. Offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
 letter with reference to your article in The Hindu newspaper regarding the similarities among the
town
 centres all across the countries. I would like to put forward a few points with respect to my disagreement on
this
 information. I completely agree with the points regarding the facilities and infrastructure. Most of the
town
 centres are identical and provide similar services,
such
 as shopping, entertainment zone which is mainly due to their specific customer demands as mentioned in your piece.
In addition
 to
this
, the area selected to construct a centre is solely based on the locality and restricts access to many people who live in rural areas.
However
, the services might be fairly similar, they have their own uniqueness. A
town
 centre in Hyderabad where I live is one of the biggest malls. It always creative ways to improve business along with public service like blood donation camp organized
last
 month.
Therefore
, I would be really happy to take you on a guided tour of my
town
 in order to help you collect more information on various aspects that could be a part of your future articles. I would really appreciate It if you could accept
this
 proposal. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Farhana Jabeen
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