You stayed at a hotel last week. After you got home, you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter • explain what happened, to your watch • describe your watch • ask the manager to help you find it

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finding my watch. It was left when I left your hotel. I stayed at the hotel in room 501

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week so that I believe my watch is still there. I would like to describe something about my watch. It is a wristwatch that has an embossed-croc leather strap with stainless steel, blue circle bezel, yellow crown and silver strap.

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watch is very important to me because it is my birthday gift from my great grandmother who passed away. I can not lose it.

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, I would be happy if you can help to find it. I leave my phone number in my signature so that you can call me when you found it. Thank you so much for your help. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Ho Dang 0989796221

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

154 words

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The Closing

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others believe that people should be free to do any sports or activities. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

In some countries, people think women should have equality with men, in particular, equal rights to work as police officers or serve in the Army. Others think women are not suitable for such jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that governments should pay full course fees for students who want to study in universities. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?