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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

#businesses #products #development
In the world of competition, every
company
 utilize
the
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advertisement to promote the latest feature of their
products
 because
this
encourage
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 people to choose and purchase their
products
 which can make a profit for their business. Personally, I believe that
this
 is a positive development not only for the
company
 itself but
also
 for the economic system.
First
 of all, advertising is one of the effective methods for encouraging people to buy the
products
. Without advertisements, people hardly know what is the new feature of
this
 merchandise or what is the benefit
for
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of
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 purchasing.
Therefore
, it is impossible for them to buy things
that
is
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are
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 never introduced. To illustrate, many Thai teenagers choose to purchase the latest version of
Samsung
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the Samsung
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 smartphone which they see through the advertisement because they receive all the information that they want
such
 as the
quality
 of the camera, the function for playing games and the ages of
battery
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the battery
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. It makes them easily decide to buy
this
 brand compared to the others which are lacking
of
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information showing how fantastic of their product's
quality
.
In addition
, using advertisements as a technique for promoting the new
quality
 of their
products
 is a positive development because it not only increases the sales rate but
also
 emphasizes the importance of
the
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creativity. When advertising becomes an essential part of the business, every
company
 tends to broaden
his
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its
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 vision of creativeness
such
 as hiring more creative workers.
As a result
, the job opportunities for
the
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multimedia artists will
be risen
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rise
have risen
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 and it can solve
the
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jobless problems in the long run.
Therefore
, In conclusion, in my opinion, some
of
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business
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businesses
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 use advertising for presenting the new
quality
 of their
products
 in order to multiply the sale rate which
is give
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 benefits for not only their
company
 but
also
 the national economy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Innovation
  • Fast-paced
  • Distinguishing
  • Psychological aspect
  • Inherently
  • Perceived
  • Continuous improvement
  • Revolutionary
  • Feasible
  • Throwaway culture
  • Undervalue
  • Longevity
  • Obscure
  • Novelty
  • Unsatisfactory
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