In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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company

utilize

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advertisement to promote the latest feature of their

products

because

this

encourage

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people to choose and purchase their

products

which can make a profit for their business. Personally, I believe that

this

is a positive development not only for the

company

itself but

also

for the economic system.

First

of all, advertising is one of the effective methods for encouraging people to buy the

products

. Without advertisements, people hardly know what is the new feature of

this

merchandise or what is the benefit

for

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purchasing.

Therefore

, it is impossible for them to buy things

that

is

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are

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never introduced. To illustrate, many Thai teenagers choose to purchase the latest version of

Samsung

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the Samsung

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smartphone which they see through the advertisement because they receive all the information that they want

such

as the

quality

of the camera, the function for playing games and the ages of

battery

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. It makes them easily decide to buy

this

brand compared to the others which are lacking

of

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information showing how fantastic of their product's

quality

.

In addition

, using advertisements as a technique for promoting the new

quality

of their

products

is a positive development because it not only increases the sales rate but

also

emphasizes the importance of

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creativity. When advertising becomes an essential part of the business, every

company

tends to broaden

his

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vision of creativeness

such

as hiring more creative workers.

As a result

, the job opportunities for

the

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multimedia artists will

be risen

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and it can solve

the

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jobless problems in the long run.

Therefore

, In conclusion, in my opinion, some

of

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business

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businesses

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use advertising for presenting the new

quality

of their

products

in order to multiply the sale rate which

is give

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benefits for not only their

company

but

also

the national economy.