Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

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of driving

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many vehicles.the majority believe

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price

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petrol

would be the best efforts to be resolved

traffic

and

pollution

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causes

issues

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the

price

of

petrol

is not the best way to

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growing

traffic

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air

pollution

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modern

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technologies

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could

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traffic

and

air

pollution

problems. To commence with, It is obvious that, using

petrol

oriented vehicle is growing in

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comparison

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last

decades.

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the number of carbon

emission

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emissions

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getting

higer

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higher

.

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eventually

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has been

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badly

espiceally

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especially

, in the big city.

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goverment

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government

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raise

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the

price

of

petrol

in the name of controlling

traffic

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pollution

it would be terrible and put

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to

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the low-middle classes in the societies.

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farmers

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in irrigation work in rural

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affected

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effected

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if the

price

of

petrol

increases.

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way how they reduce The number of

petrol

oriented vehicles or

petrol

oriented vehicles

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be converted into CNG.Those initiatives would be more

enviroment

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environment

friendly.

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,

traffic

and

pollution

could be solved

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ways.

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modern

techonologies

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technologies

for

reduceing

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reducing

trafic

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traffic

and

air

pullation

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pollution

pulsation

.

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modern

city the world

last

month they have taken

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decision

in the year of 2030 London would 0% carbon

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emission

emissions

.

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they restricted a number of

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vehicle

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vehicles

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and

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they

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the

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they

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are going to introduce

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electric

cars soon.

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technology

could

resolved

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traffica

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traffic

nd

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and

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polluation

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pollution

instand

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instant

of

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the rise

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rise

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rising

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of

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in

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petrol

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the petrol

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price

. To sum up,the world big cities are

suffueing

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suffering

suffusing

by growing

traffice

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traffic

and

air

polluation

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pollution

over the decades.introducing

morden

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modern

techonolgies

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technologies

could be the best way to reduce

this problems

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.