7. You have recently used a moving company to move your household items to a new place and they have been damaged in transfer. Write a letter to the company’s manager and say – When and where did it take place? – What is your complaint? – Suggest a reasonable solution.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to
complaint
about your moving service that I have used. I used your company service because I believe that you would carefully transfer my stuff. Replace the word
complain
However
, once I unpacked them, I was very disappointed.
First
of all, there were a lot of items that were transfered
from my house at Kenwood road to my new one at Lena road Correct your spelling
transferred
last
week. However
, some of them have been damaged during transfering
. Correct your spelling
transferring
Firstly
, left
leg of Add an article
the left
dining
table has been broken. Correct article usage
the dining
Secondly
, there were some cracked
on the cupboard. Replace the word
cracks
Lastly
, a
wheel of my working chair did Correct article usage
the
not
work not. I was sure that all items were in a good condition before moving into Rewrite the sentence
apply
this
house. Again, this
was very dissatisfied
.
I would like to suggest Replace the word
dissatisfying
you
some possible solutions to solve Change preposition
to you
this
problem. I ask you to send me new furniture, as I bought an insurance policy which covered this
case. Another suggestion is that you should train your staff to be more careful about lifting and transfering
items. Correct your spelling
transferring
Finally
, I hope this
situation will not happen again in the future.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
Jenny LeeSubmitted by kanokwann.joy on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite