7. You have recently used a moving company to move your household items to a new place and they have been damaged in transfer. Write a letter to the company’s manager and say – When and where did it take place? – What is your complaint? – Suggest a reasonable solution.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to
complaint
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about your moving service that I have used. I used your company service because I believe that you would carefully transfer my stuff.
However
, once I unpacked them, I was very disappointed.
First
of all, there were a lot of items that were
transfered
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transferred
from my house at Kenwood road to my new one at Lena road
last
week.
However
, some of them have been damaged during
transfering
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transferring
.
Firstly
,
left
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the left
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leg of
dining
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the dining
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table has been broken.
Secondly
, there were some
cracked
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on the cupboard.
Lastly
,
a
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wheel of my working chair did
not
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work not. I was sure that all items were in a good condition before moving into
this
house. Again,
this
was very
dissatisfied
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. I would like to suggest
you
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some possible solutions to solve
this
problem. I ask you to send me new furniture, as I bought an insurance policy which covered
this
case. Another suggestion is that you should train your staff to be more careful about lifting and
transfering
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transferring
items.
Finally
, I hope
this
situation will not happen again in the future. I look forward to hearing from you. Sincerely, Jenny Lee
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