7. You have recently used a moving company to move your household items to a new place and they have been damaged in transfer. Write a letter to the company’s manager and say – When and where did it take place? – What is your complaint? – Suggest a reasonable solution.

#company #move #household #items #place #transfer #company’s #manager #complaint

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to

complaint

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about your moving service that I have used. I used your company service because I believe that you would carefully transfer my stuff.

However

, once I unpacked them, I was very disappointed.

First

of all, there were a lot of items that were

transfered

Correct your spelling

transferred

from my house at Kenwood road to my new one at Lena road

last

week.

However

, some of them have been damaged during

transfering

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transferring

Firstly

left

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the left

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leg of

dining

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the dining

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table has been broken.

Secondly

, there were some

cracked

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cracks

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on the cupboard.

Lastly

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the

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wheel of my working chair did

not

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apply

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work not. I was sure that all items were in a good condition before moving into

this

house. Again,

this

was very

dissatisfied

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dissatisfying

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. I would like to suggest

you

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to you

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some possible solutions to solve

this

problem. I ask you to send me new furniture, as I bought an insurance policy which covered

this

case. Another suggestion is that you should train your staff to be more careful about lifting and

transfering

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transferring

items.

Finally

, I hope

this

situation will not happen again in the future. I look forward to hearing from you. Sincerely, Jenny Lee

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

197 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

write a letter to your manager ask for some time off to complete a qualification

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