These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, we can see rapid growth in the amount of disturbance and disorder shown on

television

. I personally believe that it is having a significant negative influence on how

children

behave.

Firstly

, from a young age,

children

are looking for role models, someone they can look up to, and they often find them on

television

, in various

tv

shows or movies. While watching

television

, kids usually think that

everyone

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that is

on

TV

is cool and famous

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and that generally leads to kids wanting to be like those famous people on

tv

. But the reality is that more and more violence is shown on different

tv

shows and movies.

Therefore

children

think that that savage behaviour is right and cool and they often act upon it.

Secondly

, being exposed to that fierce act at

such

young age can lead to damaging the person that they grow into.

For instance

, from the age of 7, we are growing and learning about life and

that is

the main reason why we should not let our

children

watch anything that has violent scenes

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because it can make permanent damage to our kids.

For instance

, a recent Child Psychological report in the United Kingdom linked the surge in juvenile shoplifting and knife attacks to the violence featured on

television

.

Therefore

, if there have been a reduction in the violence on

television

, there would have been a significant decline in juvenile crime in many societies. To sum up, the increase of the violent

tv

shows and movies that are shown on

tv

is huge. It should be reduced

as a result

of taking care of our

children

and their bright future.