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Many management interviews assess not only a person's level of experience and knowledge but also their personality. Is leadership an innate skill? What other characteristics do companies look for in a manager?

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manager
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 plays a vital role in a successful organisation. It is commonly believed that the
manager
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 should have knowledge,
experience
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 and personality to handle the responsibility. A
manager
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 should have a leadership quality
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 innate but can
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 be acquired by years of
experience
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 and interaction and working with team members.
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, a
manager
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 should have multiple qualities.
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, he should inspire, motivate and help his employees when they need him.
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, he should have good communication skills, so that he could clearly explain tasks to his employees.
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, he should be reliable and trustworthy, so that employees feel free to share their opinion and other things in which they feel difficulty.
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 to that, he should be honest and frequently give feedback to his team members about how they are doing, along with giving rewards and recognition to them.
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, he should have a leadership quality, which is inherited but can be acquired by
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experience
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 and interacting and working with teams. A good leader is one who takes initiative rather than waiting for somebody to ask. A leader should encourage and motivate his team to achieve goals.
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, a leader should guide his teams in the right direction and help them whenever they needed. In conclusion, behind the success of every institute, there is a powerful management and
manager
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 plays a key role in that, so while hiring him, people should consider things like working
experience
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, knowledge, personality and leadership quality.
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